Myst writing challenge

WALT:use adjectives to describe a setting

The young lady peered through the dirty window of the big ,bright bus as it was driving through the gigantic rocks. As the young lady was crossing the long, narrow bridge she looked down at the shimmering water and saw…  a BIG SHARK  !!!!!!!!!!! The shark was opening and closing its large mouth with its gigantic,sharp teeth showing trying to eat  her just as the she was crossing the bridge. Then it was starting to get a little dark and the moon was reflecting into the blue,shiny water as it was swaying side to side because of the strong winds. The wind was getting so strong it turned into a strong tornado but the it was morning again and it had cleared up.